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英語課題

People attend college or university for many reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge, etc). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support you answer.

To learn

In general, people enter a university to study. The university also unites, and lectures on the class assuming that it comes so that the student may study. Therefore, there is a meaning where it goes if there is something wanting to learn at the university. I think that it is not necessary to go than to enter a school of "For the time being" though there is nothing to learn. After it starts one's adult life, the one wanting to learn might be found. Entering a school at that time might be also good. First of all, it thinks whether there is something wanting to learn.
Well, there are a lot of dominant points at a university compared with the special school and self-study. For instance, it is library or teacher's talent. There might not be actually feeling if the class is passively attended. If it learns from it, I think that being possible to study deeply is an advantage of the university. I think that it is because high tuition can use such institution. The one that it is possible to use is disadvantageous if it doesn't use it. It might be understood in the meantime to want to do really. I think that it is also important to change the course ahead of time when thinking that you have a different road. (251words)

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